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Okay, so I haven't posted updates on this. I had most of it done but I had to edit parts that I toned down so I could turn it in for my creative writing class. I am very proud of myself for having fleshed out this section to close to what it will be in it's final form.

That being said.... there was a VERY GOOD reason I toned it down for school. There are some very dark themes. I felt terrible for some of the things I wrote. It's terrible, it's sick, it's sad. If I ever finish this damn story it will only get darker..... It's part of the world these characters live in, but I still feel terrible about it. 

Other than that, I hope that my writing has improved-- that I have been able to make the characters more relatable and human. They start to show more of their true colors and natures, and I hope their actions have conveyed a lot about their moral code, which will become important throughout the story. I also know some sections are borderline-cliche, but I hope it doesn't bother you too much. If you have any suggestions, let me know!
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